2018年4月英语写作社团培训记录表2
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英语写作社团培训记录表
时间 2018.4.9 地点 二楼多媒体 培训教师 敖丹
培训主题 如何写英语长难句
培训目的 学会写英语长难句
培训过程
英语作文如何写长句
step一、如何写长难句
How to develop complex sentences.
1. 写出key words,确认中心骨架
2. 逻辑排列,logical arrangements
3. 加工润色,colorize
例句:大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力,这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。
Most of (A majority of) students believe (hold the view) that part-time jobs can provide them with opportunities机会to/and develop (improve/better) communication ability能力(social abilities/interpersonal skills人际关系技巧),which is good for (is beneficial to有益于) their looking for jobs (job-hunting求职) in the future (after their graduation).
step二、拓展长句的三大方法
The most important factor因素 we have to take into consideration is sth./that…
The most important thing I want to talk about is that…sth./ that…
It is also of great importance to pay close attention to…that
Besides what is mentioned above上诉的,it is necessary to think about…
In addition to除…之外 what is talked about above, I want to tell you sth. about…
1.写引导词:包括起承转合例(让句子变得高端)
起: in the first place首先, first and foremost首要的, to begin/start with
承: second (ly),in the second place, furthermore而且,此外, moreover而且,此外, what’s more, in addition另外, besides
转:but, however, on the contrary与此相反, in contrast/comparison相比之下, nonetheless虽然如此,但是; nevertheless尽管如此,然而;
合: last but not least最后同样重要的,so, therefore,
in conclusion最后,综上所述, to conclude最后, in a/one word, in general,
例: for instance, for example, such as,
When it comes to.... 说起…
经典引导句型
There is no doubt that/in saying that…
There is no exaggeration夸张 in saying that…
It is known to us all that,
It is well-known that…
It is apparent/obvious显然的 that…it is not hard to understand that…
It is not too much to say that…
It is commonly/widely/generally agreed that… (acknowledged公认的 that…/ believed that)
2.写插入语(让句子变得客观)
that is to say
to a certain extent在某种程度上,to some degree在一定程度上,to a larger degree在很大程度上
for one reason or another因为某种原因, to put it in anothher way换言之
directly or indirectly 直接或间接
in other words 换句话说
as a matter of fact 事实上
例:English is, to a large degree, important. be后
Computer, directly or indirectly, influences our life. 行前
Computer can, as a matter of fact, influence our life. 助行间
例句:It is known to us all that, English is, to a large degree, very important due to that English is becoming a global/world language. /is becoming more and more (increasingly) popular
There is no doubt in saying that computer, directly or indirectly, to a large degree, influences our life primarily owing to that (computer can make our work and study faster) computer can improve the efficiency of our work and study.
It is hard to understand that doing part-time job can, to a large extent, broaden our horizon in that we can understand more about the society by knowing a lot of people.
3.写从句(让句子变得漫长)
名词性定语从句:that, who
时间状语从句:before, when, after, during
地点状语从句:where)
原因状语从句:because, because of that..
primarily/mainly owing to that,
partly/partially due to that,
in that 例: I like you in that you are very kind.
假设状语从句:if, on condition that… in case that…
Step三. 范文欣赏
Fashions refer to the things that most people tend to do. Some fashions are positive and meaningful while some are negative and harmful. So we can’t simply say we should follow fashions or we shouldn’t follow fashions. It’s the effect fashions have on society that counts.
When it comes to clothes, fashions should not be followed. What others wear may not fit you. Also, you don’t need to change your likes and dislikes in order to follow fashions. It’s stupid to run after fashions without consideration. What clothes we should buy depends on our financial ability, our tastes, our identity and so on. If everyone follows fashions without thinking, people will lose their own personality and our society will lack the motivation to develop. In a nutshell, we shouldn’t follow wearing fashions. It’s important that we dress what we like and feel comfortable in it.
Fashions also include donating money and items. It’s the fashion that we should follow. Wenchuan and Yushu earthquake destroy many people’s homes. As Chinese, we have the res-ponsbility to give a hand to them. To help them rebuild their houses and pick up their courage, we should do what we can. At one time, many people give out a large number of money and items without hesitation. We are glad to see that the fashion has been formed. On no condition should we give up helping others. That fashion represents Chinese spirits. Everyone following the fashion, we will over come any difficulties and head to the bright future.
Should we follow fashions? At some time, we should; at some time, we shouldn’t . If the fashion has a positive effect on our society, it should be encouraged. If the fashion does harm to our society, it must be resisted. It’s the principle we should insist on. Only in this way can our country develop rapidly. Treat fashions correctly, and everyone will live a better life.

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